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« Reply #360 on: Dec 13, 2008 10:50:43 AM » |
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me too... i get all excited if i get nice comments...
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« Reply #361 on: Dec 15, 2008 09:21:16 PM » |
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patra and her yaoi go together, she never gets bored of rereading them  (i hope this is right lol) dtlct, shhh... i was once a participant in the war lol and thank you. I look forward to your new set  <- off topic, i know... I have started to go back XD because I'm a survivor! Just need a little revision here and a little there... and a large slash in the middle.. good as new. Gosh... too bad yui made me delete her part in TB too... i wanted to read the whole thing over... booo yui... wait.. yui, you have it deleted off your computer too? *wails* |
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« Reply #362 on: Dec 29, 2008 06:19:50 PM » |
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dtlct, shhh... i was once a participant in the war lol and thank you. I look forward to your new set <- off topic, i know... LOL! Aha! So you were! (Just kidding - I only read and ran away asap since it was super scary.) I ran out of inspirations but maybe get it back later for New Years (lol). Anyway, back to topic, BLM, did you delete some of your stories on here again? 'Cause I couldn't find that one story w/ Wallace, Cyndi, Nicholas. I want to re-read! (But I'm actually to go back and re-read my stuffs so I can remember where I left off to update!  ) |
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« Reply #363 on: Dec 30, 2008 09:23:11 AM » |
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oh yea totally! I was so amazed with my very first story. Itz not a work of art or anything but I think that's my best work. after that I don't really have confidence in all my stories
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« Reply #364 on: Dec 30, 2008 10:57:33 AM » |
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my first story was the worst out of all... but then, the rest of my story slowly became better...
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« Reply #365 on: Jan 01, 2009 12:55:15 AM » |
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better and better we all become
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« Reply #366 on: Jan 02, 2009 02:22:52 AM » |
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yup... everyone always will improve right?
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« Reply #367 on: Jan 02, 2009 08:01:23 AM » |
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OMG! xD I went back to read CL a old story of mine....one i wrote in POV..and LOL! T'was hilarious! xD
It wasn't in script form but it may has well been...and gosh all the coincidences that happened O_O xD
ahhh improvements are good xD
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« Reply #368 on: Jan 02, 2009 09:26:35 AM » |
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Yup...
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« Reply #369 on: Jan 30, 2009 08:03:42 PM » |
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Take your old works into account because chances are, they will help you improve.
How does it feel writing in script form then changing to the "regular" way, B? XD
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« Reply #370 on: Jan 30, 2009 11:38:22 PM » |
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Trying to get this thread going again?
If you're asking in general, I'll go first (since the others are not around right now). I started the regular way since I started writing short stories (not fan fic related) but 'cause I got lazy so switched to script format for my actual first fan fic. But when I switched back to regular way again, it made me want to go back to the other stories and change it to regular way as well. (If it wasn't like 70 chapters I already went and changed it! LOL)
I think both ways are fine - depending on whether people could use it to their advantage, but the regular way help me improve my descriptions and narrative a bit better. (NOT to mention my horrendous and limited vocabulary at times.)
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« Reply #371 on: Jan 31, 2009 12:40:41 AM » |
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wowzers! So i guess you prefer the non-script way now I think maybe other script writers think the way you do (the laziness XD) since you don't have to spend time describing but get to the juicy conversations  I agree that the "regular way" contributes more when it comes to developing a better grasp for description. The thing about vocab is you not only need to know what the words mean... you also need to know how to manipulate it to assist in conveying what you want your readers to get out of your story. |
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« Reply #372 on: Jan 31, 2009 03:27:57 AM » |
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Yes, the second part is the hardest, manipulating the vocabs so it not only flow better with the story but also give off the right feeling and/or imagery.
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« Reply #373 on: Jul 31, 2009 02:04:58 AM » |
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Well I've reread all my stories....then rereread them..... and still..... my 1st story is fail. My 2nd story is on crack.... and soo random. My 3rd story is perverted..... like srsly.... definitly not pg AT ALL. I am super proud of my recent stuff though! (I only write rated yaoi stories sooo yeah) like my 2 recent ones I am writing. In all I have 8 storie( only 2 r done. Oh Missa shame on you.) But yeah lols. There's my input :3
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« Reply #374 on: Sep 07, 2009 09:28:53 AM » |
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reasonly i'm trying to edit one of my stories and maybe post it up
or i'll finish up some stuff i left hanging just like dat... LOL!!
too much ideas dat i can't even focus on one thing... *sighs*
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« Reply #375 on: Sep 09, 2009 10:32:16 PM » |
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I recently feel like whatever I do with the stories - even if my readers like it, I still feel that it's too lame. I meant the first time around, it sounds romantic (a bit cheesy) but sounds like a good idea to me to just put it in as part of the plot. But then when I went back to read it like several months later, I'll be like, "Where in the world did I get that lame idea?" So far, I could only say that I'm proud of only 1 story that I wrote.
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« Reply #376 on: Nov 02, 2009 11:40:21 AM » |
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i feel like dat too... but when i read all those nice comments i got i'll get happy and start smiling like a fool... LOL!
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« Reply #377 on: Nov 09, 2009 02:34:48 AM » |
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Haha... Don't we? I guess to others it might seems silly but to us it is just a form of complement for our work!  |
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